Hey hi people, when I was unpacking and packing my things, I've found my essay outline during my foundation year at MMU. Oh my my, it's been years. I feel so old!
The essay is an exemplification essay. Which this type of essay is the most simplest type of essay with much easier to understand. Usually we inserted facts not for a fantasy kinda essay. Before I carry on with my essay, You must know how to make the essay outline. You must have topic, thesis statement which have another at least three minor thesis statements, minor thesis statements and conclusion. Got it peeps? Let me share my exact outlines I used to type and send to my lecture via email! Hee~
Exemplification essay: an outline
Topic: Problems of having a same face with sister.
A. Thesis statements: My older sister and I have a very similar face according to people not me! So sometimes or almost of the time, both of us having troubles with it. The problems are mistakes in identifying both of us, people assume that we have similar or same pattern of behaviour and always comparing each other.
B. TS1: Mistake in identifying both of us,
- Same face, sometimes can be assume as twin but apart for 2 years
- Not just that, almost got same height, weight and body appearances
- 1st, mother happened to call me 'kakak' instead of 'adik', same also to my sister
- 2nd, cousin sister suddenly hugs my sister and wish her 'happy birthday', but it's my 15th birthday, she's 17 for God Sake!
- 3rd, my senior (close to my sister) greet me warmly, confused by that, make a blank face, the senior was in very confused state, next day, the senior asked my sister, my sister laughed because of the silly mistake.
C. TS2: People assume that we have similar or same pattern of behavior.
- People think that 'same face same behavior/attitude', totally wring, real twins also different
- So, people treat us the same, hate it, because I hate to participate in any competition, hate the practices, but have to because my sister joined the year before-Debate competition.
- 1st, People randomly pat me on shoulder at school, I really dislike it to the max, they do it so because they tend to greet my sister that way.
- 2nd, my teacher (also my sister;s) did some jokes but I didn't crack at all, feeling weird, because my sister definitely burst already.
- 3rd, people dislike or hate me because they think I'm fierce as my sister (Secretary of school prefect), tend to avoid me, or teachers offer me a position in prefect organization!, really not interested.
D. TS3: Always comparing each other.
- Since same face, they love to compare almost everything!! Frequently done, with or without each other, They includes big family, schools, friends even strangers.
- Compared every details as they could, they compared height, skin colour, IQ, EQ, weight, study, social life, friends stuff, boyfriend stuff and all stuff.
- 1st, comparing our height, she's slightly tall, she's older than me, always wondering when can I reach her height, really HOPE so.
- 2nd, comparing our matureness, but this time I win, she's a bit not matured, but she's responsible though and caring compare to me.
- 3rd, boyfriend stuff, how she can get it but I didn't, really bothering them, we're young teenage girl sisters not old grandma lady sisters, why bother, dating life, match making unreasonable theories.
E. Conclusion.
As a summary, people definitely and absolutely can't denied that it is actually brings many problems towards us that having similar face. We are really in mess when people always known us upside down and brings a lot of trouble. In facts, the way they treat us the same really annoying, everyone is special so do I, so it is really unfair to treat me the same as her. Not to forget, by making us the same really not helping in our close relationship, we're totally different so it is obviously that we can be analyse and extracted!
Hope you enjoy reading. I am sorry, I am too lazy to write an essay. Hahaha.. I've never make this an essay to be truthful because I am lazy~
Muah.. Tata~
