I'll show how to make outlines for EXEMPLIFICATION ESSAY!

Hey hi people, when I was unpacking and packing my things, I've found my essay outline during my foundation year at MMU. Oh my my, it's been years. I feel so old!

The essay is an exemplification essay. Which this type of essay is the most simplest type of essay with much easier to understand. Usually we inserted facts not for a fantasy kinda essay. Before I carry on with my essay, You must know how to make the essay outline. You must have topic, thesis statement which have another at least three minor thesis statements, minor thesis statements and conclusion. Got it peeps? Let me share my exact outlines I used to type and send to my lecture via email! Hee~


Exemplification essay: an outline
Topic: Problems of having a same face with sister.

A. Thesis statements: My older sister and I have a very similar face according to people not me! So sometimes or almost of the time, both of us having troubles with it. The problems are mistakes in identifying both of us, people assume that we have similar or same pattern of behaviour and always comparing each other.

B. TS1: Mistake in identifying both of us,
             - Same face, sometimes can be assume as twin but apart for 2 years
             - Not just that, almost got same height, weight and body appearances
             - 1st, mother happened to call me 'kakak' instead of 'adik', same also to my sister
             - 2nd, cousin sister suddenly hugs my sister and wish her 'happy birthday', but it's my 15th birthday, she's 17 for God Sake!
            - 3rd, my senior (close to my sister) greet me warmly, confused by that, make a blank face, the senior was in very confused state, next day, the senior asked my sister, my sister laughed because of the silly mistake.

C. TS2: People assume that we have similar or same pattern of behavior.
             - People think that 'same face same behavior/attitude', totally wring, real twins also different
             - So, people treat us the same, hate it, because I hate to participate in any competition, hate the practices, but have to because my sister joined the year before-Debate competition.
             - 1st, People randomly pat me on shoulder at school, I really dislike it to the max, they do it so because they tend to greet my sister that way.
             - 2nd, my teacher (also my sister;s) did some jokes but I didn't crack at all, feeling weird, because my sister definitely burst already.
              - 3rd, people dislike or hate me because they think I'm fierce as my sister (Secretary of school prefect), tend to avoid me, or teachers offer me a position in prefect organization!, really not interested.

D. TS3: Always comparing each other.
             - Since same face, they love to compare almost everything!! Frequently done, with or without each other, They includes big family, schools, friends even strangers.
             - Compared every details as they could, they compared height, skin colour, IQ, EQ, weight, study, social life, friends stuff, boyfriend stuff and all stuff.
             - 1st, comparing our height, she's slightly tall, she's older than me, always wondering when can I reach her height, really HOPE so.
             - 2nd, comparing our matureness, but this time I win, she's a bit not matured, but she's responsible though and caring compare to me.
             - 3rd, boyfriend stuff, how she can get it but I didn't, really bothering them, we're young teenage girl sisters not old grandma lady sisters, why bother, dating life, match making unreasonable theories.

E. Conclusion.
             As a summary, people definitely and absolutely can't denied that it is actually brings many problems towards us that having similar face. We are really in mess when people always known us upside down and brings a lot of trouble. In facts, the way they treat us the same really annoying, everyone is special so do I, so it is really unfair to treat me the same as her. Not to forget, by making us the same really not helping in our close relationship, we're totally different so it is obviously that we can be analyse and extracted!

Hope you enjoy reading. I am sorry, I am too lazy to write an essay. Hahaha.. I've never make this an essay to be truthful because I am lazy~

Muah.. Tata~

Lawatan ke RTC Bekenu

Salam semua~

Mula-mula, saya lupa bila saya pergi Bekenu nak tulis cerita ni. Lepas tu saya tak ada 'selfie' a.k.a ambik gambar perasan cantik untuk entri ni sebab saya jadi tukang gambar. Hahahaha.. tapi walau apa pun, entri ni khusus kepada RTC walaupun cerita ni memang tak lengkap sebab kertas pasal cerita ni hilang~ sebab saya dah pindah (hee~ rahsia)

Bermulanya bila ke Bekenu hujung minggu, jadi ambik la keputusan tulis cerita pasal RTC. Jadi tema entri kali ni talaaaaaa "Biar Gambar Berbicara". Mempersembahkan~ 

Ni sepupu yang sekali jalan dengan saya. Kiri: Ka Pizah ,
Kanan: Adil. Kedua-duanya guna nama singkatan, nama
sebenar--> hehehehehehe

Ni jugak teman pergi Bekenu. Dari kiri: Mimin, Emah,
Ka Pizah dan Ka Nono. Semua lebih tua dari saya
kecuali yang Emah ni. Heh heh heh~

Sebelah tanda RTC tu ada tempat letak kereta yang banyak
berbanding sebelum ni masa belum siap, Ya Allah, nak cari
tempat tu MENCABAR!

Masa ni belum rasmi, jadi bendera tarak ada tapi tiang
adala~ Ni kawasan depan bangunan RTC

Tadaaaa, Bahagian depan bangunan RTC. Belakang
yang hijau tu ada orang jual makanan~ Woo~

Bab ni.. hmm saya skip ya~

Pasar Basah. Kat sini orang beli ikan semua tu lah. Tapi
bukan yang sayur-sayur~ oh ya, sebelah Pasar Basah ni
ada orang jugak jual barangan asas bagi sedap macam
telur, bawang dan garam~ hehehe..
ada jugak benda-benda makan suka-suka macam keropok~

Tamu Kering. Kat sini anda boleh lihat ada jual sayur-sayur,
buah-buah, benda yang jarang dapat kat bandar-bandar. Satu
lagi, beli kat sini lebih jimat sebab orang-orangnya tak
kedekut. Boleh main tawar harga dan kuantiti lebih berbaloi!

Saya nak buat kesan khas tapi GAGAL. (T^T)

Kakak dan Abang yang ramah (saya dah lupa nama). Saya
sempat jugak lah cerita sikit-sikit sama mereka ni. Mereka
ramah siap bagitau lagi yang minggu depannya ada acara
merasmikan RTC (yang saya tak sempat datang tu) oleh
Menteri, eh ke Timbalan Perdana Menteri?? Tak ingat. Senang
cerita kakak ni memang terbaik sebab cerita macam-macam
pasal Bekenu. (y)

Pasar Makanan.. Hue hue hue..tak tau nak panggil apa~
Ni gambar paling akhir sebab rasanya saya dah letak
apa yang patut kat RTC ni~ Hee.. kalau tertinggal, saya
minta maaf sangat-sangat sebab tak sengaja. Oh ya, cucur
sukun sedap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jadi kalau anda ada masa, sila datang ke Bekenu dan singgah ke RTC di hujung minggu. :) Kalau jumpa saya jangan malu tegur, nanti saya boleh tunjukkan (bayar sendiri.. hahahaha) cucur sukun (kalau ada lah)

Tata~ 

Words of the day - 10

Hey ho,

How do you do? Hue hue hue~ We do make mistakes aite?

As Bruce Lee says, it always forgivable when we had already admit them. We had to admit our mistakes to make us stronger because, the only one most strongest and weakest person  to make us rise and fall always been us because we are ourselves inner strength.

Got it? Hee~

After we had admit it (from heart of course), we must committed to changed ourselves for better future. SO THEN Mistakes are always forgivable. Because the points is not to commit the old wrongdoings and start a new life - The Motivated us. :)

Take care! Tata~

Words of the day - 9

Hey guys. :) It's been a long time that I didn't share anything. So today I will share some words that really suit to me. Hee.. ^^

"If you end up with a boring miserable life because you listened to your mom, your dad, your teacher, your priest, or some guy on television telling you how to do your shit, then you deserve it."

-Frank Zappa 

Yes indeed. Sometimes I am this kind of pathetic good girl that listen to people in order to keep their mouth shut. Yes a bit harsh but hey it's true. We keep follow orders without really fight for our justice. We did fight back and strangled a bit but of course it is not enough. Other wise why we still doing the things we dislike? 

Hence, if you think they're much better it only means you need to improve more than them. If you really better than them, lead your own way. Not them. Choose wisely for your life and future. Ignored any talks and sayings you might heard. Because the best decision always happen when you believe wholly on it. :D

Tata~